My first shayari

This was my first attempt to write shayari:

"Karte hain hum intezaar aapka,
Khil ut the hain sunkar naam aapka,
Chaahthe hain hum aapko itna sanam ki,
Bandh aankhon mein bhi dikhtha hain chehra aapka"

I hope it is a good start to my first blog:)